After School

Almost a decade ago, purely by chance, I stumbled upon the world of erotic fiction through a website that still holds a special place in my heart (and, let’s be honest, not just there :P)—Literotica.

At the time, I wasn’t entirely unfamiliar with adult-oriented stories, having previously come across some vintage erotic books from the 70s that I’d found at second-hand market stalls. However, Literotica introduced me to something unique—a platform where anyone could share their kinks and fantasies. While finding stories of real quality isn’t always guaranteed, I’ve always respected the creative freedom it offers.

That said, there are a few stories from back in the day that I absolutely adored but were sadly left incomplete by their original authors. Since these gems are from so long ago, I thought it would be nice to revisit and share them here, with the possibility of continuing the narratives where they left off.

_The first story I’d like to share was written by Faye_Skylark almost ten years ago. I hold out hope that we’ll see more from her in the future, but for now, let me highlight her incredible work. Enjoy! ;)_

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The bells had just rung out signalling the end of the school day and the throngs of students at Madison Ashley Senior High spilled out from their classes and slouched their way across the campus.

The usual groups and social clusters began to assemble as the students filtered out to car parks, bus stops or stopping to loiter along the way. Everyone was in their school uniforms, but the expressions of that uniform seemed to range widely from polished and preppy to slacker and provocative.

Luke Goldberg burst out of class, rushing to his locker to grab his stuff and get going, almost forgetting to close the damned locker door behind him. His friend Jeremy was already waiting outside for him, looking anxiously at his watch.

"Shit, Luke, there you are!" Jeremy exclaimed. "What took you so long, man? We gotta hustle if we're gonna make it in time."

"Fuck, I know man, sorry," said Luke, breaking into a jog to catch up as Jeremy almost took off as they arrived, "Rachel stopped to talk to me on the way out of class about something-"

"Rachel?" Jeremy asked, exasperated. "Don't waste your time chatting with her, man! She's already got that bonehead boyfriend of hers all over her, you'll never get anywhere with her."

The two eighteen year old school friends both took off at a brisk walk as they manoeuvred through students and out of the school grounds, breaking off to head down some side streets.

"I don't want to get with her..." protested Luke. "I mean, I would, if I could, she's fucking gorgeous, but I don't have a thing for her or anything, I was just being nice."

"Don't be fucking nice, man! What have I told you about being nice? You're never going to get laid if you're nice! I'm never nice. I'm ice fucking cold."

"Oh yeah, have you gotten laid yet?" smirked Luke.

"I got like a handie from Alyssa at Jake's party last weekend," Jeremy responded, slightly wounded at Luke's jab. "That still counts, man! Not to mention, remember where we're going to right now! I'm trying to look after you, set you up, you know! Don't be giving me attitude just because I haven't gotten laid yet... I'm trying, man, I'm trying real hard."

"So do you know if Crystal's going to be there today?" asked Luke eagerly.

"Dude, one hundred fucking percent she's gonna be there today!" said Jeremy, nodding seriously.

"Are you sure?" asked Luke, squinting at Jeremy in doubt.

"I mean, pretty sure..." said Jeremy.

"Pretty sure?! Is she going to be there or not, man?" asked Luke.

"Relax dude, Brandon owes her pot or money or money for pot or something," said Jeremy. "Crystal will be there to collect, she seems pretty **** for cash at the moment. Then she'll hang for a while and that's when you'll get your chance. Crystal fucking McLaren!"

"Crystal McLaren," repeated Luke dreamily.

Crystal McLaren, a senior who had turned eighteen a few months back, was definitely on the slacker/provocative end of the spectrum. Crystal was socially a bit of an outsider. She mostly hung out with the slacker/stoner crowd, but was increasingly popular in senior year on account of both her natural good looks and her growing reputation of loose morals.

Crystal was of average height for a girl but very slender and surprisingly busty for her figure. Luke and Jeremy estimated she was probably a 32D or 34C in their many conversations about the girls in their cohort and figures, bust sizes and gossip of who was hooking up with who. Crystal stood out more than anything else for being a natural stunning redhead. She had fair, freckled skin, light grey eyes and delicate pale pink lips. Her silky, wavy copper hair tumbled down just past her shoulders. Sometimes she would wear it back with a school headband or tie it up into a high ponytail or bun. Regardless it would look amazing and effortlessly sexy.

Luke was obsessed with Crystal. She had a gorgeous girl next door look but at the same time styled herself as a bit of a wild, sexy rebel. Like many of the girls in her group, she would push the boundaries with her school uniform regularly; the blue tartan skirt hiked up and worn shorter like a mini skirt; thigh high black or patterned stockings rather than regulation over knee ones; white blouse tight with top buttons undone to show off a figure fitting tank top and knockout cleavage or the shirt tied off at the midriff over a crop top to show off bare belly and waist. It usually earned Crystal and her group their fair share of detentions and warnings, but the students would persist and for the most part the school put up with it.

"I still find it hard to believe the whole thing about the Blowjob Brigade," said Luke.

"Believe it, Luke, it's fucking A+, man," said Jeremy. "Last Tuesday I got a hummer from Stephanie Summer - you know Stephanie, right?"

"She's in my biology class," said Luke. "Brunette, right? Petite? Green eyes?"

"Fuck, I don't know what color her eyes were, all I could see was the top of her head!" joked Jeremy. When Luke didn't laugh, Jeremy went on more seriously, "but yeah, that's her. Hot little pocket rocket. Swallowed me to the base! I mean, I'm not that big or anything, but still! Sucked like a vacuum cleaner. Making me hard just thinking about it, actually."

Luke thought of Crystal on her knees in front of him, watching the redhead as she swallowed him, and felt his cock stirring in his trousers.

"So, have you got to try Crystal yet...?" asked Luke, hesitantly. He would be insanely jealous if Jeremy had got to enjoy Crystal going down on him before Luke had, but at the same time, he was desperately curious to hear anything about Crystal's involvement in the Blowjob Brigade.

"Nah, man," said Jeremy. "Haha, don't look too relieved, Luke! If she's there today, I'm queueing up right after you! Everyone says she's the best. I want to try her too. She hasn't been around a lot lately though, I hear."

Luke couldn't help feel relieved, even though it was a strange thing to feel anxious about in the first place. It wasn't even like he had a proper romantic crush on Crystal. He just had the hots for her. A gigantic boner crush. From the sound of things too, Crystal was already sucking her fair share of cock this year, so it wasn't like she was a blowjob virgin or anything. Yet all the same, Luke was thrilled that he was quite possibly about to get the chance to get a blowjob from the girl he wanked off to thoughts about every night.

"We're here," said Jeremy. "Be cool. Let me do the talking."

They had arrived at what was a nondescript back alley between an abandoned bakery and an old diner. It was a pretty secluded place, with a lot of crates and random things to sit or lean on, and no easy way to peek on what was going on. About a dozen senior students, boys and girls, from Madison Ashley High School from the slacker/stoner crowd were hanging out, some sitting on crates or the ground. Some were smoking - pot from the smell of it - while others were just chatting or or on their phones. It was a pretty ordinary after-school scene. The students must have been here for a little while already, as it wasn't uncommon for this group to skip class. For a moment, Luke thought Jeremy was having him on about the whole Blowjob Brigade.

Jeremy, like Luke, was from the nerdier crowd in High School, devouring comic books and geek culture. But Jeremy was pretty outgoing and seemed to be able to make friends with anyone. He would hang out with seemingly any group with ease, where Luke would be far too socially awkward to go out of his comfort zone usually.

He was feeling pretty awkward already, standing mutely in the alleyway as the other students glanced over and ignored him, while Jeremy was catching up with a couple of the guys and girls.

A petite brunette sitting on a crate right near Luke looked up at him.

"Hey, Luke, right?" the brunette asked.

Luke turned to look at her properly and realised suddenly it was Stephanie Summer. Instant flashes of Jeremy's earlier description of the pretty brunette giving head filled his mind and stirred his crotch.

Stephanie's dazzling green eyes looked up at Luke with amusement beneath her 'blowjob bangs' haircut - named so because the guy wouldn't have to hold the girl's hair back off her face - and Luke shuddered with involuntary pleasure as he imagined himself wanking off onto the brunette's cute face.

"You alright?" Stephanie asked as Luke's expression hazed over.

"Huh? Oh yeah, fine. Sorry. Hey Steph," said Luke awkwardly, trying to recover and hoping she wouldn't notice the boner growing in his school trousers.

"You're a weird one," Stephanie laughed, before extending out a hand holding a smouldering cigarette shaped roll. "You want a joint?"

"Um, no thanks," said Luke, before pointing to himself and saying, "it's not good for my asthma."

Luke instantly regretted how lame he sounded but it was too late to rescue the moment.

"Asthma, huh?" Stephanie laughed and took a drag of the joint. "You're funny."

Stephanie turned to shout out to Jeremy, "hey, Jeremy! Your friend is funny!" before turning back to Luke and saying "you should come hang out with us here. I guarantee you'll have fun."

"Hey, is Crystal here?" Luke asked Stephanie abruptly, unable to contain himself.

"Crystal?" asked Stephanie. "Yeah, she's inside with Brandon. Why, you looking to hook up with her too or something?"

Luke went red in the face and was unable to answer. Stephanie's bluntness was catching him off guard.

Stephanie giggled at Luke's reaction. "Aww, how cute! I would hook up with her if I were a guy, she's fucking hot."

At that moment Jeremy came to Luke's rescue and pulled him aside while flirting audaciously with Stephanie, who seemed to be happy to flirt back outrageously too, even simulating a blowjob expression with her fist and her tongue pushing out the inside of one cheek, before breaking into a fit of laughter again.

"Have fun in Crystal's mouth, Luke!" Stephanie called out cheerfully as the boys hurried away.

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Meanwhile, inside the small confines of the abandoned bakery, Crystal McLaren was trying to negotiate with a desperately horny Brandon.

"Crystal, I'm so hard, can't you just take care of me real quick?" asked Brandon hopefully as he pointed to the bulge in his school trousers.

"Do you have my money or not?" asked Crystal impatiently, hands on her hips.

"Chill babe, of course I do!" said Brandon, "I just don't have all of it on me..."

"What the fuck, Brandon?" exclaimed Crystal. "You said last week you had it all."

"Oh, come on Crystal, you know I'm good for it! I just need a little more time," Brandon whined.

"I need that money now, Brandon!" said Crystal, her cool grey eyes wide, trying to keep her voice down so she wouldn't be overheard and trying not to show how **** she was.

Crystal felt like she was either going to scream or cry. She was counting on the money Brandon owed her and she needed it soon.

"Whoa, easy there Crystal. Look, the money is all there, it's just going to take me a day to get it all together for you. But I can get you all of it and more by tomorrow. See I'll throw in extra just for you if you do something special for me, ok?"

"How much extra?" asked Crystal.

Brandon sensed her desperation was as much about the amount of money she needed as how quickly she needed it. He seized the opportunity.

"I can throw in another twenty dollars if you blow me right now," said Brandon.

"A twenty? Fuck off!"

"What? You normally blow for a twenty."

"You already owe me! I need more than my usual fee if you can only get me the money tomorrow, ok?" protested Crystal.

"Ok, ok, how about fifty dollars then?" Brandon relented, before adding quickly, "But you gotta swallow as well. Don't worry, I'm so hard already, it won't take long."

"Fine. Fifty dollars on top what you owe me and you get it to me tomorrow or you can forget about any of the Brigade ever blowing you again!" Crystal said, her grey eyes narrowing.

"Jeez, I get it, don't need to threaten freezing me out, Crystal," muttered Brandon.

Being frozen out by the Blowjob Brigade was like social suicide for their clique. In addition to having access to the sex perks of the Brigade cut off, anyone cast out was pretty much persona non grata at school and beyond among their peers. It wasn't used often but the threat was enough to keep their otherwise notoriously unreliable group in line.

Crystal had never threatened to freeze someone out before but she needed the money badly to make the rent by the end of the week. Besides, she had still agreed to blow Brandon so he wouldn't be too sour on her. And an extra fifty dollars would really help. She barely scraped enough together to meet the rent last time and she was cutting it way to close again. After school tricks were fine for extra pocket money for the other girls, but Crystal needed much more serious and reliable income if she was going to keep up financially. Blowing horny eighteen year old boys after school (or sometimes during) wasn't going to cut it anymore. Students just didn't have the kind of cash she needed, not at her school anyway.

Crystal had come up with a Plan B. Though before she could even think about that, she needed to deal with Brandon first.

Brandon was clearly **** to get his rocks off too to agree to pay fifty dollars for just a blowjob, and he seemed keen on getting it on as fast as possible, unzipping and dropping his school pants and boxers to his ankles right away.

Rolling her grey eyes as Brandon grinned and started wanking his cock in front of her, Crystal crouched down on the dusty floor of the abandoned bakery, her already short blue tartan school skirt riding up her legs as she did so to reveal more of her creamy thighs. May as well get this over with quickly, thought Crystal.

Crystal had her white school shirt unbuttoned far enough to show off her perky tits and cleavage in her black tank top underneath. Brandon enthusiastically felt Crystal up through her tank and shirt while she tugged at his stiff cock with one hand. Brandon wasn't lying about how hard he was.

Crystal considered tying her flowing red hair back into a ponytail to keep it out of her face, but before she had time to do anything Brandon already had his needy hands on the back of her head and urged her face forward towards his red and swollen erection.

The sexy eighteen year old redhead barely had time to open her mouth before Brandon's raging hard on pushed between Crystal's glossy pink lips.

"Bllmmmfhh!" mumbled Crystal as her mouth suddenly filled with cock.

"Oh yes, that's it Crystal! Your lips feel so good on me!" moaned Brandon in delight as his dick was enveloped in the embrace of Crystal's wet, warm mouth.

Though a little put off by Brandon's urgency, Crystal went to work dutifully on his throbbing erection. The redhead student bobbed her head on the cock at a steady rhythm. Her soft lips slid smoothly over the taut flesh of the erect cock, eliciting moans of pleasure from Brandon on each stroke.

Crystal looked up with her grey eyes at Brandon while she sucked and slurped busily on his dick. Brandon was staring back down at her, jaw hanging open as his breathing grew heavy and quick as Crystal's head bobbed faster.

Brandon's hands were busy too, no longer just encouraging the sexy student crouching before him to swallow his cock deeper. As Crystal licked, sucked and slurped with increasing vigour Brandon's hands clamped down on her head and pushed and pulled in shallow but increasingly frantic face fucking.

A few times Brandon would cheekily try and thrust forward a little, his cock head surging toward Crystal's tight teenage throat to try his luck. Crystal would bear with it just until the throbbing erection would press against the entrance of her throat before backing off, about to gag.

Not many of the girls could deep throat yet, though a few were trying their best to practice. Crystal was one of the better ones but Brandon didn't want to push his luck when she was already angry at him.

The blowjob had only been going on for about two minutes but already Brandon's pleasure was about to peak. The eighteen year old boys were still a long way from developing stamina in sexual encounters. While disappointing for sex, this did make for much easier and faster blowjobs for the girls, allowing them to perform on a lot more guys before becoming fatigued with aching jaws and sore lips.

Crystal sensed his nearing climax and deciding not to waste time, worked her small hands on his shaft and balls. One hand wrapped firmly around the base of Brandon's cock while the other gently coaxed and fondled his swollen balls as they rose and tightened in preparation for release.

The redhead kept bobbing on the trembling pink head of Brandon's cock, her soft lips keeping it in a firm embrace in her salivating mouth. The underside of the cock head was resting perfectly on her tongue as she began to accelerate her wanking on the base of the erection.

Brandon began to moan in shuddering awkward gasps, their pitch rising as his climax built. His hands were no longer directing Crystal. One balanced on her shoulder for support while the other gripped her red locks tightly as he simply tried to hold on as she blew him.

"Arrggh- oh, god. Shit, fuck, gaah-!" Brandon sputtered uncontrollably, right before he ejaculated forcefully into Crystal's ready mouth.

"Mmmmn mmnnfhh! Hmmnfhh!" moaned Crystal, stunned by the deluge of semen suddenly flooding her mouth.

Crystal didn't stop pumping Brandon's cock however, even as his cum threatened to escape her lips and dribble down her chin. Luckily her lips were locked on tight as Brandon unloaded a serious build up of man juice into her maw.

When he was finally drained, Crystal pulled off quickly and spat the load of cum onto the ground beside her.

Brandon looked a little disappointed she hadn't swallowed. Nevertheless he put his cock away with a grin on his face.

Crystal got to her feet, a little out of breath from her exertion, cheeks red, a small sliver of cum still trailing from her lips and onto her chin.

"Thanks Crystal, you're the best!" said Brandon as he hurried outside. "I'll get you your money tomorrow, promise!"

Crystal wiped her lips with the back of her hand as she watched Brandon go. She wasn't sure she would see the money in time. She needed a better plan. There was something she had been putting off trying that could solve her problems, but now she was out of time. It was now or never.

She had better get moving now in that case, Crystal thought, if she was going to make it to the shop in time.

Crystal grabbed her bag and reapplied her lip gloss before heading back out to the alley.

**

Luke felt his heart beat faster and his crotch stir as Crystal McLaren finally emerged from the abandoned bakery. The gorgeous redhead was still wearing her school uniform. The blouse was half unbuttoned to reveal a black tank top and showed off her perky rack. Her blue tartan skirt was short and hiked up to become basically a mini skirt. The black stockings ended just over the knee to show off plenty of slender and creamy thigh between them and the skirt.

A minute or so before he had spotted Brandon leaving, red faced and looking very pleased with himself. Luke couldn't help but be both jealous and aroused at the thought of Brandon being pleasured by Crystal just moments earlier. With any luck, he would be next to enjoy her services.

"Hey Crystal!" Jeremy called out, dragging Luke behind him like a salivating puppy as they made their way over to the cute redhead. "Luke here wants to ask you something!"

Luke cringed in embarrassment as Jeremy literally pushed him in front of Crystal, who seemed to have an anxious look on her face.

"What is it?" asked Crystal, straight to the point, her grey eyes wide as she looked up at Luke.

"Well, um, hi Crystal, uh, how are you?" mumbled Luke as he tried and failed to keep glancing down at Crystal's tight cleavage. Her milky white skin was such an alluring contrast against the black cotton tank top that stretched tightly over her chest.

"Fine," said Crystal. "I'm kind of in a hurry, actually, so..."

"Luke wants to hire your services," injected Jeremy loudly as Luke went red in the face.

Crystal seemed to take this news in her stride and put her hands on her hips as her cool grey eyes sized Luke up.

"Do you have any money?"

"Uh, y-yes," stammered Luke as he fumbled for his wallet.

Crystal rolled her eyes. "Not here, knucklehead. Look, do you have a car?"

"Yeah, um, it's parked back at school," said Luke, confused.

"If you can give me a ride to the stores we can work out something on the way," said Crystal, tossing some of her bright red locks over her shoulder. "That cool with you?"

"Y-yeah, that's awesome! Uh, follow me..." said Luke before spinning around and almost tripping over.

Jeremy gave Luke a big grin and a thumbs up before heading into the abandoned bakery with his arm around the petite Stephanie.

It looked like Jeremy was about to get his own servicing too, thought Luke. Moments later Luke could actually hear slurping noises followed by Jeremy whooping with excitement. Stephanie had evidently not wasted any time in getting to work.

"Are we going or do you want to stay here and wank by yourself to that?" asked Crystal tartly as she nodded at the noises coming from the bakery building.

"Oh, I'm coming, sorry Crystal," said Luke as he tore they left the alley together, leaving Jeremy and Stephanie to hook up.

A little while later and Luke was driving Crystal downtown in his beat up second hand car. The air conditioning didn't work so they had the windows down, but the hot weather wasn't helping much.

"Fuck, it's hot in here," swore Crystal as she swiped away at her phone.

"Yeah, sorry about that," said Luke, unsure what more he could do.

Beside him, Crystal wriggled out of her white school blouse, leaving her in her snug black tank top and revealing her freckled white shoulders and arms as she stripped off.

Luke could see Crystal's breasts jiggle in the tank top out of the corner of his eye and had to focus hard to keep his eyes on the road.

"It's just coming up here," said Crystal as she tied her fountain of red hair back into a high ponytail.

Luke pulled into a quiet parking lot behind a row of shops and found a secluded park away from most of the other parked vehicles. He may have been nervous being around Crystal but he was always thinking ahead.

Now that they were safely parked he could finally turn his attention and eyes to Crystal. He drank in her face and body like a thirsty man in a desert that had just found an oasis. He was hoping fervently Crystal would not turn out to be a mirage he was simply imagining.

She wasn't. She was right here in his car next to him. Now down to her tank top, Luke could see how slender and lithe Crystal's body was. Her back curved deliciously into a trim waist, her body slender and athletic. Her breasts were perky and generously sized and remained invitingly snug and squished together in her low cut black tank top. He could now see her bra straps too, black against her white skin, running over her shoulders crossing under the spaghetti straps of the tank top.

Crystal's seated position in the car meant her already short blue tartan skirt was riding up her thighs to scandalous levels. Her athletic thighs were on full devilish display before the rest of her slim legs disappeared into those black thigh high stockings.

Most of all though, Luke watched Crystal's gorgeous face. It was a soft and delicately featured face, with a little nose and small chin, which belied her usual wicked harsh attitude. Her grey eyes were cool and lightly made up with mascara and eyeshadow. Her glossy rose pink lips were unconsciously pouting and Luke shuddered at the decadent thought of having his cock between those same soft lips.

Crystal's fiery red hair tumbled down her neck in the ponytail she had tied it back into, set even more ablaze by the light of the sunset around them.

Luke was shaken from his reverie by Crystal's voice.

"Thanks Luke, for driving me down here," said Crystal, turning to face Luke and in doing so showing off her big tits and tight cleavage. "I don't have long, so let me know what I can do for you."

"C-can I have a blowjob?" Luke blurted out. He was hoping to have been more smooth about it and chatted with Crystal before asking but his nerves and his painfully hard erection got the better of him.

"For fifty dollars you can," said Crystal matter of factly.

Fifty dollars was all the cash he had on him, thought Luke, even as he fumbled for his wallet. Luke wasn't from a rich family and his pocket money came from working at the local Super Duper Mart. But having Crystal McLaren suck his dick was an opportunity he wasn't about to pass up.

Crystal waited patiently for Luke to pull out the cash. She stashed it immediately in her bra, before tossing her ponytail over her shoulder and began to lean over from her seat in the car towards Luke.

"Can I kiss you first?" asked Luke suddenly.

Crystal was caught off guard, sitting back upright but still facing Luke. She frowned but her cheeks were blushing a little red. The boys didn't normally want to kiss in these kinds of exchanges. They usually just pulled a girl's head down to their crotch and kept them there until they were finished. Kissing was for girlfriends, not the Blowjob Brigade.

"Um, sure, I guess," said Crystal. Now it was her turn to be flustered. "But make it quick, I have to go soon."

"Do you have work at one of the shops?" asked Luke, curious.

"Something like that," said Crystal, before volunteering, "um, you can feel me up too if you want. Only above the waist though."

"Wow, sure," moaned Luke before leaning over to kiss Crystal. Their lips met, parted slightly and embraced in a warm, wet kiss. Crystal sighed in pleasure as to her surprise she found Luke quite a good kisser, angling her body and stretching forward while her hands pulled him in closer.

The two eighteen year old's tongues soon found each other as they played and explored in each other's mouths. Luke had one hand around Crystal's trim waist while the other roamed up to slide over the abundant curvature of her chest. The redhead moaned as Luke's warm hand cupped and squeezed one of her tits and she found herself thrusting her chest out harder into his grip, her body wanting more.

Luke continued to grope Crystal eagerly as his fingers found hot bare flesh roaming across her cleavage in the low cut tank top. He so badly wanted to put his face and mouth squarely between those beautiful, young and generous tits. Before he could work up the courage to do so, however, Crystal's sense of time had got the better of her and she pushed Luke back as she panted lightly, recovering her breath.

"Lean your seat back," Crystal instructed and Luke complied right away.

Now Luke was stretched out a little more comfortably in the driver's seat of his car. He watched entranced as the fit young redhead of his lusty dreams, Crystal McClaren herself, leaned her sexy body over from the passenger's seat until she was completely stretched over the gearbox.

Luke, his confidence and lust rising, was already unbuckling his belt and slid his school trousers and briefs down to reveal a stiff, aching erection curving towards his belly like a banana. He had always considered himself fairly average in endowment, but seeing just how hard and huge he was now made him swell with a little pride.

Crystal seized hold of his cock at once, gripping the base lightly in her small and delicate fingers before sliding and pumping them along the shaft as she pointed the dick upright and towards her face.

Luke gasped as Crystal wanked him and looked down at the awesome sight of Crystal's sensational figure draped over his lap. The twin sets of black straps from the tank top and bra racing over her fair, freckled shoulders. The way the tank top flattered and hugged her tiny waist. The feel of her bountiful breasts mashing into his thigh. Her head hovering tantalizingly over his crotch.

Luke was about to say something when Crystal's head finally dropped onto his lap completely and she devoured his throbbing penis into her beautiful moist mouth, hugging the rigid member with her soft pink lips.

All coherent thoughts went out the window as Luke let out a shaky cry of pleasure and relief at the ecstasy of having Crystal engulf his cock in her hot mouth.

Then Crystal began to actively suck, bobbing her head and her wavy ponytail of red hair in a steady, practiced rhythm. Luke nearly lost his mind and couldn't help himself from moaning loudly.

"Oh! Oh fuck!" were the only words that came out as he struggled to express the enjoyment of having Crystal suck his dick.

This wasn't the shy, tepid blowjob as foreplay experience he was used to with his ex girlfriend. This was serious, professional cocksucking. He may have been biased and Crystal was certainly not in the league of the pornstars he would wank off to. But this was a business-like blowjob that meant business. That Luke had just paid for it somehow made it all the more debauched and exciting. Crystal was servicing him for money and all he had to do was sit back and enjoy it.

Luke found his hands far too idle and **** to cling on to something as pleasure radiated from his cock through to his whole body. After roaming hungrily over Crystal's fit body, including a poor attempt to reach underneath her to feel up her tits again, Luke's hands eventually settled lightly on Crystal's bobbing head and her radiant red hair. One hand gripped her ponytail like a handle, as if clinging for dear life, while the other gently embraced the back of her head. Luke didn't push or pull on Crystal's head too much, he was enjoying this experience far too much to test the boundaries by being too demanding. Little did he know that Crystal was fairly used to that kind of behavior from far less sensitive guys. Instead Luke simply let his hands ride with the motion of the redhead's excellent dick sucking, head bobbing motion.

Crystal was sliding her lips up and down his thick shaft, over and over, her tongue lashing the sensitive head of his cock. The only noises coming from the redhead were slurps and little moans as her head bobbed quickly and efficiently in his lap. Her hand was fondling his balls and Luke could already feel them rising in readiness to fire.

There was so much more Luke wanted to savour and enjoy about the blowjob, but in only a minute - or was it two? - he was well on his way to blowing his load.

He wanted to do the polite thing, to warn Crystal of his impending climax, to thank her, to smoothly tell her just how amazing she was.

Instead all Luke could manage was a strangled cry caught in his throat as his body convulsed, shuddered and his hips thrust up suddenly and deeper into Crystal's sucking mouth and proceeded to ejaculate without warning.

Luke could hear Crystal's muffled squeal of shock as he inundated her mouth with spurt after spurt of hot cum, but he didn't care. He had cum too soon, but the sheer pleasure of the moment overwhelmed everything as he released his pent up semen in tense, rapid bursts between Crystal's soft pink lips.

Luke could see Crystal squirming as she struggled to contain the cum that had just been unloaded in her teenage mouth. Her back arched, her shoulders hunched, and her head lurched up, instinctively trying to pull off of the twitching cock shooting fresh hot cum into her mouth.

But even as Crystal was trying to recoil from the eruption of cum, Luke was now holding her head down to keep her mouth on his dick as he kept spurting semen.

"Aaaah, oh fuck! Crystal! Yes!" gasped Luke as he held Crystal's head down in his lap until the final pulses of cum filled her mouth and he slumped back in the car seat, utterly spent and satisfied.

As Luke's hands relaxed and released their hold on Crystal's head and hair, she quickly pulled her face out of of Luke's lap. Her mouth was full to the brim with hot, sticky jizz. Crystal immediately threw the car door open and leaned her body out to spit the cum onto parking lot ground outside.

It took a while to get all of the disgusting sticky load out of her mouth and once she was done she had to grab tissues from her bag to wipe the trails of spit and semen from her lips and chin.

"Wow, thanks Crystal! That was incredible!" said Luke, oblivious to Crystal's discomfort and annoyance at just taking a surprise oral creampie. Typical guy, thought Crystal.

"Yeah, no problem," Crystal muttered as she grabbed her shirt and bag. "I gotta go now."

"Can we do this again?" asked Luke hopefully.

"If you have the cash, sure," said Crystal, before leaving the car and slamming the door behind her a little harder than she had intended.

Why was she so cross with him? Thought Crystal to herself. Guys did this to her all the time. Was she hoping Luke was going to be different? More romantic? It wasn't like she liked him or anything, she barely knew him.

She had to put it out of her mind. She had something important to do now to make sure she kept earning the money she needed. With that, she straightened her tank top and tartan skirt and made her way through the car park to the shops.